I was a game-addict. I loved playing online games, especially horror games. That night, my parents had gone to sleep early to catch a morning flight. Meanwhile, I sat in front of my laptop to ...
A for the narration buddy! Seriously I wanted more of this tale and down the pace. Could have left more dots to make it more complex for the open ending. Loved the concept buddy, only complaint is that it was short which's actually a plus.
Good Work!!!. It has undoubtedly potential to expand further and the bits same time in both clocks, craved for more moments like that. Kudos buddy.
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a that's purely a terror for experiencing something like that by a lead. well, I have the habit of reading horror stories at the witching hours yet I never felt tremor. and this story is too good to experience 😅
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Damn! It was really a great story. Even I got hallucinations for a while after reading this. As if someone is watching me. Your narration is so extraordinary.
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A for the narration buddy! Seriously I wanted more of this tale and down the pace. Could have left more dots to make it more complex for the open ending. Loved the concept buddy, only complaint is that it was short which's actually a plus.
Good Work!!!. It has undoubtedly potential to expand further and the bits same time in both clocks, craved for more moments like that. Kudos buddy.
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a that's purely a terror for experiencing something like that by a lead. well, I have the habit of reading horror stories at the witching hours yet I never felt tremor. and this story is too good to experience 😅
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Damn! It was really a great story. Even I got hallucinations for a while after reading this. As if someone is watching me. Your narration is so extraordinary.
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