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Innocent Love

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Ravi was running wildly through the narrow streets of the slums holding a piece of paper in his hands. It was not an ordinary piece of paper, it was the address of his new friend, Reena! It's ...

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Neelam Matey
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    Devendra Gauttam
    09 May 2020
    what a nice story 👍👌👌✍️✍️
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    Raja Singh "Prince"
    22 May 2020
    Respected And Honourable Mam Ji, Good Morning🙏🏻🙏🏻 First of all, I need to say surely. You have all the qualities for be a successful writer because you described everything with very kind and in a beautiful way. It is all about poverty, feelings for his mother, the emotion of that person who saved his pocket money for purchase the bicycle but still he sacrificed for her. it was a really so heart touching. it also happens in the life so many times. When we sacrificed so many things in Life only for that person who never care. We must be loyal and honest but We must think that are we being honest for a right person or not. The person is right for us or not. You gave a very beautiful lesson in this story. I am feeling so confident about the life. we must never give up for anything. we must keep patience. Thanking You💐💐
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    Alisha Raut
    30 May 2020
    Lovely story Ma'am somewhere it's reality of life. Ofcourse your work is commendable. I'm happy to see your creativity and love towards literature. Thank you ma'am for giving little dosage of ethics even today with help of your writings.
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    Devendra Gauttam
    09 May 2020
    what a nice story 👍👌👌✍️✍️
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    Raja Singh "Prince"
    22 May 2020
    Respected And Honourable Mam Ji, Good Morning🙏🏻🙏🏻 First of all, I need to say surely. You have all the qualities for be a successful writer because you described everything with very kind and in a beautiful way. It is all about poverty, feelings for his mother, the emotion of that person who saved his pocket money for purchase the bicycle but still he sacrificed for her. it was a really so heart touching. it also happens in the life so many times. When we sacrificed so many things in Life only for that person who never care. We must be loyal and honest but We must think that are we being honest for a right person or not. The person is right for us or not. You gave a very beautiful lesson in this story. I am feeling so confident about the life. we must never give up for anything. we must keep patience. Thanking You💐💐
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    Alisha Raut
    30 May 2020
    Lovely story Ma'am somewhere it's reality of life. Ofcourse your work is commendable. I'm happy to see your creativity and love towards literature. Thank you ma'am for giving little dosage of ethics even today with help of your writings.