Bitter & Sweet : The Memories Of Eternity

Your writing style is good. I think you should include more conversation part. Try changing the style of the conversation part. plot of the story is good and inspiring. All men are not the same. A change should be given for every relationship. All the best. If you are free, check out my story in the competition "Forever love... "

Writing style good.. But the unwinding of the plot could be made a bit more interesting. All the best!

In the course of love, in the transformation of love, the man who fully understands a woman and the woman who fully understands the decree is able to travel together until the whole life of this life is hidden. The life we ​​live in is narrow but only a few millions of memories. Once love comes out of the mind, I think it is wrong to think about the present day. The real love that began in friendship is the end of life, with the endless love of life until the death of a girl in love. In the heart of the word in the heart of the friend, the feelings of the heart are tears in the eyes of the eyes first and then the heart of the garden love the heart. Write More Greetings. All the best