Real miracle surge from terrible disaster has narrated well.
You got to edit VN ,there are few errors,for example when talking about the old lady it should be woman every where it is women, one of the member of 45 ...when you use one it should be followed by a plural noun' one of the members' .
You got a lot potential ,I just want throw light on small errors .I hope you'll understand.
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we can't imagine all the messy atmosphere as you faced being a doctor,I have read this natural calamities in the period of Corona, It is not a coincidence to understand that you Doctor,s are actually frontline worriers in any period.God bless you.
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Real miracle surge from terrible disaster has narrated well.
You got to edit VN ,there are few errors,for example when talking about the old lady it should be woman every where it is women, one of the member of 45 ...when you use one it should be followed by a plural noun' one of the members' .
You got a lot potential ,I just want throw light on small errors .I hope you'll understand.
Well done
viji
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we can't imagine all the messy atmosphere as you faced being a doctor,I have read this natural calamities in the period of Corona, It is not a coincidence to understand that you Doctor,s are actually frontline worriers in any period.God bless you.
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