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Feisty Aficionado

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romanceshort story

I saw Arpita for the first time in the computer class. The moment when I met her, I fell in the obsession of her dreamy eyes that reminded me of eyes of Urvasi, the nymph who would dwell in ...

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Arijit Bhattacharya

Poetry is my passion. Music is my obsession❤

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    Subhoraj Das
    12 June 2019
    the story was quite good but if i talk about your writing skills it's really disappointing me you need to grip over the language first the grammar was not up to the mark and the sentence construction also you need to more focus in this language if you are thinking to write in English in future think about it mate i hope next time you will be better
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    29 June 2019
    It was only a matter of seconds before she decided that she was my life; But, the heart is the seven genres she is fighting for life with the question of whether she is my life. Write more congratulations
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    Magnificent. hope you and Arpita be together forever
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    Subhoraj Das
    12 June 2019
    the story was quite good but if i talk about your writing skills it's really disappointing me you need to grip over the language first the grammar was not up to the mark and the sentence construction also you need to more focus in this language if you are thinking to write in English in future think about it mate i hope next time you will be better
  • author
    29 June 2019
    It was only a matter of seconds before she decided that she was my life; But, the heart is the seven genres she is fighting for life with the question of whether she is my life. Write more congratulations
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    Magnificent. hope you and Arpita be together forever