I saw Arpita for the first time in the computer class. The moment when I met her, I fell in the obsession of her dreamy eyes that reminded me of eyes of Urvasi, the nymph who would dwell in ...
the story was quite good but if i talk about your writing skills it's really disappointing me you need to grip over the language first the grammar was not up to the mark and the sentence construction also you need to more focus in this language if you are thinking to write in English in future think about it mate i hope next time you will be better
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the story was quite good but if i talk about your writing skills it's really disappointing me you need to grip over the language first the grammar was not up to the mark and the sentence construction also you need to more focus in this language if you are thinking to write in English in future think about it mate i hope next time you will be better
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It was only a matter of seconds before she decided that she was my life; But, the heart is the seven genres she is fighting for life with the question of whether she is my life. Write more congratulations
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