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Forbidden love

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At 7 a.m. in the morning, and the rekha was out on the morning walk, and the earphone was in her ear.  Only then was a boy coming from the bike.  He blowed  horns so that she should get side  but ...

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    Riya belani
    15 June 2019
    You are good keep it up..!😊
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    BNR Nageswarr
    22 May 2020
    what do meaningless sentenses express? Is it English or Tenglish?? Not only the content but also language is important to weave a story. Lesser than sub standard language is used in the story.There are grammatical blunders. Meaningless words and phrases are used.
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    02 June 2021
    I was like 😍🥰🥰😍➡️😭😭😭😭😭 Like... seriously....the story had a mix of emotions.... Really excellent work..... there were a number of grammatical mistakes...but...I chose to ignore them.... thus making me blind towards your flaws....... I mean we all are humans.....and we make mistakes........ If people are saying that ' There are so many mistakes..... ridiculous....!' or any negative remarks.....,then they think that we authors are computers ......l so just ignore them.....they have zero understanding....... ( To all haters....you guys are ridiculous) so Ignore them☺️ Again...I loved the story... keep up with the good work....... never give up.....always keep trying ....... always keep smiling..... stay safe..... Also...do read my stories......I think you might like them....... stay safe.....
  • author
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  • author
    Riya belani
    15 June 2019
    You are good keep it up..!😊
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    BNR Nageswarr
    22 May 2020
    what do meaningless sentenses express? Is it English or Tenglish?? Not only the content but also language is important to weave a story. Lesser than sub standard language is used in the story.There are grammatical blunders. Meaningless words and phrases are used.
  • author
    02 June 2021
    I was like 😍🥰🥰😍➡️😭😭😭😭😭 Like... seriously....the story had a mix of emotions.... Really excellent work..... there were a number of grammatical mistakes...but...I chose to ignore them.... thus making me blind towards your flaws....... I mean we all are humans.....and we make mistakes........ If people are saying that ' There are so many mistakes..... ridiculous....!' or any negative remarks.....,then they think that we authors are computers ......l so just ignore them.....they have zero understanding....... ( To all haters....you guys are ridiculous) so Ignore them☺️ Again...I loved the story... keep up with the good work....... never give up.....always keep trying ....... always keep smiling..... stay safe..... Also...do read my stories......I think you might like them....... stay safe.....