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Retreat

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The Sun sinks dutifully in a pool of crimson-hued sky. Carried on the wings of shadowy bats the silence of twilight spreads over me. I hear my blood running in the veins and the lullaby of water-lilies folding in. Alone in a mood of retreat, I become unseen. Unconcerned, in the background, the immature moon shimmers silently, floating on the pool of reflections, I am lost as I'd never before been, Until the stillness is broken By the barking of stray dogs. Alert. Time for me to return to a ...

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Debasis Tripathy

Debasis Tripathy is originally from Odisha, a state in eastern India and he currently lives in Bangalore solely to earn a livelihood. He started writing seriously a little late, but luckily since then, within a short span he has his writings published in Former Cactus, Prachya Review, Nuances, CLRI Journal, Setu, Muse India, and Indian Review, among others.

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    Archana Nair
    04 ഡിസംബര്‍ 2018
    Lovely
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    Sarbani Mohapatra
    07 മാര്‍ച്ച് 2021
    great poem! I liked the mood invoked by that one word 'Alert'; could almost imagine the dog's ears twitching up!
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    Smitha Abraham
    07 ഡിസംബര്‍ 2018
    i loved the imagery.....it is very visual...i can see it..
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    Archana Nair
    04 ഡിസംബര്‍ 2018
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    Sarbani Mohapatra
    07 മാര്‍ച്ച് 2021
    great poem! I liked the mood invoked by that one word 'Alert'; could almost imagine the dog's ears twitching up!
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    Smitha Abraham
    07 ഡിസംബര്‍ 2018
    i loved the imagery.....it is very visual...i can see it..