An intense scene arises the moment the character begins to leave the airport terminal. Trying to reach a destination in the outter limits of the city in early morning darkness through travel
with an elusive male stranger . The narrative explains in dramatic
and frightening detail the possibilities of sinister cruelty as
the trip continues. A candid look inside the main character's mind
channels her absolute terror as
she prepares for slaughter in a
matter of minutes. Even a last
minute self defense plan is insufficient comfort to ward off
certain death . The expectation of brutality and victimization shifts as driver has a gas tank refueled by a third stranger after
locking the car doors. The heart- wrenching need to escape is followed by a return to travel with
a visibly shaken passenger. The deviation to a side road in the middle of nowhere is now only a
coincidence . A mere symptom of a car running out of gas. Her Cellular phone battery is not charged and she must now rely on a suspicious person to assist her in text messaging while alerting him that she cannot call for help. She remains vulnerable and defenseless, but must still rely on generosity of a possible felon. Now the driver moves on and a mysterious, uncertain destiny still awaits. This narrative captures the pinnacle of human emotions and challenges the senses through gripping detail of a harrowing scene with menacing possibilities. A psychological rollercoaster for readers down to the last second.
Very well done....... challenge your creativeness further and make a short film !!! 🎆🎆🎆🎆
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I love the racy narrative. I wish it had ended on a funny note or something. Also the mystery around whom the narrator was meeting that night is left unclear.
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An intense scene arises the moment the character begins to leave the airport terminal. Trying to reach a destination in the outter limits of the city in early morning darkness through travel
with an elusive male stranger . The narrative explains in dramatic
and frightening detail the possibilities of sinister cruelty as
the trip continues. A candid look inside the main character's mind
channels her absolute terror as
she prepares for slaughter in a
matter of minutes. Even a last
minute self defense plan is insufficient comfort to ward off
certain death . The expectation of brutality and victimization shifts as driver has a gas tank refueled by a third stranger after
locking the car doors. The heart- wrenching need to escape is followed by a return to travel with
a visibly shaken passenger. The deviation to a side road in the middle of nowhere is now only a
coincidence . A mere symptom of a car running out of gas. Her Cellular phone battery is not charged and she must now rely on a suspicious person to assist her in text messaging while alerting him that she cannot call for help. She remains vulnerable and defenseless, but must still rely on generosity of a possible felon. Now the driver moves on and a mysterious, uncertain destiny still awaits. This narrative captures the pinnacle of human emotions and challenges the senses through gripping detail of a harrowing scene with menacing possibilities. A psychological rollercoaster for readers down to the last second.
Very well done....... challenge your creativeness further and make a short film !!! 🎆🎆🎆🎆
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I love the racy narrative. I wish it had ended on a funny note or something. Also the mystery around whom the narrator was meeting that night is left unclear.
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