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The women in black

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The women in black Sherlee --Marlee wake up beta. you are getting late for school. Marlee-Mom,i dont want to go to school. sherlee-But why beta?what happened? Marlee-Mom they all,they all tease ...

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𝔄𝔭𝔬𝔩𝔬𝔤𝔶 𝔞𝔠𝔠𝔢𝔭𝔱𝔢𝔡 𝔱𝔯𝔲𝔰𝔱 𝔡𝔢𝔫𝔦𝔢𝔡 kindly follow my Instagram Channel and do subscribe to get early access of my upcoming stories.. https://www.instagram.com/nishitaaaaaa05?igsh=cWtvcTh0N2syajBr

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    25 July 2020
    I want to tell you something about story telling😊 Character A telling character B about something we just saw happening to character A. Facial expressions of a first-person narrator. (We can’t see what our own faces look like, so don’t write “A smile lit my face from ear to ear.”) At the climax, what morally significant choice does your protagonist make? (Your reader should care about the protagonist’s decision, and ideally shouldn’t see it coming.) An effective short story (or poem or drama) does not simply record or express the author’s feelings; rather, it generates feelings in the reader.....🤓 so try to sketch character like you are building a clay idol day by day ...it's not just giving description 😊😊 btw am eagerly waiting 🤘 ..keep posting mam
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    Didarul Islam
    14 June 2020
    অনুপম লেখনী।চমৎকার লাগল।💝 আমার লেখা "বৃষ্টিবালিকা" কবিতাটি পড়ে দেখলে খুশী হতাম।আমার প্রোফাইলেই পেয়ে যাবেন।😊💝
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    Aman Khan
    09 June 2020
    very excellent heart touching story your fast story nice and beautiful no mistake and best of luck black sky
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  • author
    25 July 2020
    I want to tell you something about story telling😊 Character A telling character B about something we just saw happening to character A. Facial expressions of a first-person narrator. (We can’t see what our own faces look like, so don’t write “A smile lit my face from ear to ear.”) At the climax, what morally significant choice does your protagonist make? (Your reader should care about the protagonist’s decision, and ideally shouldn’t see it coming.) An effective short story (or poem or drama) does not simply record or express the author’s feelings; rather, it generates feelings in the reader.....🤓 so try to sketch character like you are building a clay idol day by day ...it's not just giving description 😊😊 btw am eagerly waiting 🤘 ..keep posting mam
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    Didarul Islam
    14 June 2020
    অনুপম লেখনী।চমৎকার লাগল।💝 আমার লেখা "বৃষ্টিবালিকা" কবিতাটি পড়ে দেখলে খুশী হতাম।আমার প্রোফাইলেই পেয়ে যাবেন।😊💝
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    Aman Khan
    09 June 2020
    very excellent heart touching story your fast story nice and beautiful no mistake and best of luck black sky