What bullshit!
Very poorly written. Extremely unrealistic, I mean who takes a stranger, unconsciously lying on the pavement in a pool of his own blood to his home. Wasn’t she supposed to call the cops?
Hundreds of tenses wrong and several basic grammar missed. Few spellings are messed up too.
Lots of irrelevant and unnecessary details.
Overall a very bad read.
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What bullshit!
Very poorly written. Extremely unrealistic, I mean who takes a stranger, unconsciously lying on the pavement in a pool of his own blood to his home. Wasn’t she supposed to call the cops?
Hundreds of tenses wrong and several basic grammar missed. Few spellings are messed up too.
Lots of irrelevant and unnecessary details.
Overall a very bad read.
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